Pandora-Productions 2007-11-15 08:04:53

I'll have a look
take a piss...
and tell you what i think

Pandora-Productions 2007-11-15 08:26:46

HOLY LIVING ZOMG BATMAN! an inverted Newgrounds logo!

i watched it... twice...
(managed to hold the urine back you see old bean)

first impression... WHY IS IT SO SAD?!

the second the stone at the bottom of the tree was shows i knew what was going to happen

*attempting not to give any spoilers so that no one knows the the brother is dead*

...

whoops!

its really impressive for only a days work though! good job!

Five-Iron 2007-11-15 13:28:33

It was good, but not great. Probably what's stopping it from being great is that you had to spell everything out with the story line. The grave stone saying "Died in a car crash" is something you definetely won't see on many graves at any cemetary. You should have pulled it off with more subtle hints to the connection between the two characters and why he died.

PicoZX 2007-11-17 14:23:27

Don't forget to add us in co-authors in Word Up Collab. ^-^
(Poor kid...h)