nicely done
I do admit the coloring is rather interesting and the background fits it rather well...
HOWEVER
I am rating it no stars purely because you DID NOT credit the artist or state you copied an art. I believe this drawing was the cover for 'Love Triangle' a Doujin based off one piece (don't know the artist).
Please next time remember to credit who you copy your art from next time even if its from a doujinshi (hentai).